Have you hear about slum?

Luis Gomez

10/30/11



            "The houses are made of mud and they're very crowded. And the slum very dirty ,you can see."

By Sheri Fink. The most population place in the world is slum. The existence of slum affects human populations because the people do not live in strong houses ,slum create an increase in population ,and the dirty conditions lead to diseases. Many people that live in slums do not live in a strong house.

            One reason of the existence of slums affects human population is people do not live in strong house. "The houses are made of mud and they're very crowded. And the slum very dirty ,you can see."

By Sheri Fink. By that Sheri Fink mean that the slums do not have strong house because the house are made from mud. If many people live in slums the people would have to make they'er house from mud. By the earth population growth many people now live in slums.

              A other reason why the existence of slums affects human population slums create on increase in population. The population growth increased rapidly in the mid-20th century. (source1) By that source 1 is say that the population growth is increasing over time. Slums are over populated this make it a hard time to walk round. By slums growing in population the place may be dirty and it may lead to bad thing happening.

              A other reason why the existence of slums affect human population the dirty condition lead to diseases. "The slum is very dirty you can see." (socurce 2)By that socurce 2 mean that where ever slums are they come with dirty conditions lead to diseases. Slums have dirty grow and they also smell and that mean flies live round the area conditions many diseases. If the earth population keep growing there well be more slums really fast.

            "The houses are made of mud and they're very crowded. And the slum very dirty ,you can see."

By Sheri Fink.The existence of slum affects human populations because the people do not live in strong houses ,slum create an increase in population ,and the dirty conditions lead to diseases. If slum are round the world with the people do not live in strong hoses and slums create an increase in population and the dirty condition lead to diseases. If earth keep increason in populatoin how many more slum well there be.

Introduction 

        "The houses are made of mud and they're very crowded. And the slum very dirty ,you can see."

(By Sheri Fink).The most population place in the world is slum.The existence of slum affects human populations because the people do not live in strong houses ,slum create an increase in population ,and the dirty conditions lead to diseases. Many people that live in slums do not live in a strong house.

I. Introduction
 A. "The houses are made of mud and they're very crowded. And the slum very dirty ,you can see."

 By Sheri Fink

 B. The most population place in the world is slum.

  C. The existence of slum affects human populations because the people do not live in strong houses ,slum create an increase in population ,and the dirty conditions lead to diseases.

 D. Many people that live in slums do not live in a strong house.

II. Defendable point #1

A. One reason of the existence of slums affects human population is people do not live in strong house.

B. I. "The houses are made of mud and they're very crowded. And the slum very dirty ,you can see."

 By Sheri Fink

   

    II. By that Sheri Fink mean that the slums do not have strong house because the house are made from mud.

C. If many people live in slums the people would have to make they'er house from mud.

D. By the earth population growth many people now live in slums.

III  defendable point #2

A. A other reason why the existence of slums affects human population slums create on increase in population.

B. I. The population growth increased rapidly in the mid-20th century. (source1)

   II. By that source 1 is say that the population growth is increasing over time.

C. Slums are over populated this make it a hard time to walk round.

D. By slums growing in population the place may be dirty and it may lead to bad thing happening.

IV defendable point #3
A. A other reason why the existence of slums affect human population the dirty condition lead to diseases.

B. I. "The slum is very dirty you can see." socurce 2

   II. By that socurce 2 mean that where ever slums are they come with dirty conditions lead to diseases.

C.Slums have dirty grow and they also smell and that mean flies live round the area conditions many diseases.

D. If the earth population keep growing there well be more slums really fast.

V. conclusion
A."The houses are made of mud and they're very crowded. And the slum very dirty ,you can see."

By Sheri Fink

B. The existence of slum affects human populations because the people do not live in strong houses ,slum create an increase in population ,and the dirty conditions lead to diseases.

C. If slum are round the world with the people do not live in strong hoses and slums create an increase in population and the dirty condition lead to diseases

D. If earth keep increason in populatoin how many more slum well there be.